|Reviews for Falling for the Wrong|
| HopelessRomantic97 8/12/12 . chapter 15
wow. awesome chapter! im glad you updated:)
| HopelessRomantic97 8/1/12 . chapter 14
Wow. This is some good stuff. I really hope you continue writing this BC its worth it:)
| pooh-the-winnie 7/16/12 . chapter 13
I love it!
| StillYDG'n 7/14/12 . chapter 13
Besides a couple of grammatical errors, it was really good. Ugh, I feel really bad for Richard. But yeah, don't feel so guilty because if he weren't there you would've gotten hurt, or raped or something. Keep writing
| StillYDG'n 6/30/12 . chapter 12
It's really good. Ah, poor Keith...at the time. :c
| anon 6/26/12 . chapter 11
Now that's a clear tell-tale sign to break up with him /: Plus, she's WAY better off with Richard who has feelings for her, too. Being clingy is not necessarily bad per se; it means that you care a lot than most. So I hope Leila ends up with Richard despite his imperfections. If anything, she can finally be his guiding light and a most perfect reason TO live.
| Guest 6/26/12 . chapter 11
As a reader, i cant help but sympathize for leila and actually imagine the scenarios she was in. She deserves a hell of alot better than this two-timing jerk! Im hoping she breaks up with him immediately before things get messier. If she knows whats good for her, she'll cherish her OWN happiness and give Richard a chance. At least he doesnt find her clingy or says backstabbing remarks to jerk friends. Leila, you'll do urself a greattttttttt favor by breaking up with a dickhead like Chris and give others -although imperfect and have demons of his own - a fighting chance.
Fyi to both writers: I know both Richard, Cole and Alyssa irl and am related to one of the characters in ur story. Hence, why i sympathize greatly and write these insanely long reviews/advice. Please keep writing though! You and tears are fantastic and are future writers-to-be!
| Guest 6/26/12 . chapter 12
Great read. I cant imagine how Cole feels right now. Maybe it would do them good by taking the time to talk bout their feelings in a good, long chat. Plus, love is a give and take - they say. If Cole cant man up by making sacrifices to preserve his relationship with Alyssa, perhaps thats a sign that youre not meant to be together. While ur still young, u might as well live it up instead of living in regret and misery.
| carma52 6/25/12 . chapter 5
That's so cute. I like it!
| Giggly girl 4/23/12 . chapter 11
REALLLLY GOOD CHAPTER! Ugh, i dont like Chris. i used to now hes nothing but a jerk. Thanks for updating! :)
| StillYDG'n 1/2/12 . chapter 10
I like the ending. :3
| Sept.23 1/2/12 . chapter 9
Hmm. I never knew you didn't have a roof.
| StillYDG'n 11/26/11 . chapter 9
I feel so bad for Richard. :(
This chapter was really deep and captured his emotions. Keep writing :)
| TaxDay 9/29/11 . chapter 8
It's a well written story. From the last few chapters, until now, I see why the chain of events worked...
| LOVETHISSTORY 9/21/11 . chapter 8
greatt story so for, just one spelling mistake. update soon!