Nice writing, I just don't get what the whole story was really about. I was expecting a shocker at the end or something, and I'm not saying the story was bad, I just don't get it. :)

I would say a early borderline dysfunctional family.

Still in the end Riddle seemed to get better. Hilarious nonetheless.

Nice work.

Be sure to check out the extra chapters for "TSA".

I loved this one. I loved the concise way you told of an entire life in such a small space. If this was an assignment, I hope you got an A.

I really like the detached way in which your protagonist speaks of his life. As if these highly emotional(well, they ought to be!) events don't even affect him at all.

"Crashing my car with her inside it sure was fun."-This made me think of remote control cars though, where Ronald could remotely crash the vehicle. Maybe "Losing my Ferrari to a crash, with the woman inside it, sure was worth it." would work better?

I feel that this Ronald Riddle guy is very cynical, but also very funny.

that was interesting, it went over a lot in a short matter of time. It wasn't too hard to follow which was nice. There was a sense of humor that was nice.

Rose