|Reviews for The Forgotten Angel|
| Hotel Whiskey 9/6/11 . chapter 27
Regarding your name conflict... Maybe have an inner part of them awakened with a new name? Like a past life almost. Does that make sense? Then you could have really big extravagant names from their past -Angel -lives.
Anyway, onto the chapter. I think the interaction between Lee and Pinku is really adorable. Is she older then him? And I'm very curious about this master of theirs and what he'll be teaching.
| Hotel Whiskey 9/6/11 . chapter 26
Becoming a firetruck? Interesting. And I understand now about the dragons, thanks for clearing that up. I'm glad you added a but about Pinku and Lee, will you be doing that for all the other characters? And might I add that Pinku's dragon sounds adorable?
| Hotel Whiskey 9/2/11 . chapter 25
I like the idea of the fur being flames, that's super cool. I think that (considering that they are dragons) it was a bit too easy for them to be tamed, but you're the author.
I can't wait to see what training will be like!
| Hotel Whiskey 9/2/11 . chapter 24
Gasp! Dragons! I love dragons! I'm super exited now. Funny though, I was going to add dragons into my story too. Great minds think alike I guess P
Anyway, onto the next chapter!
| Guest 9/1/11 . chapter 18
HOLY CRAP YOU USED MY QUOTE! that is so cool and by the way you should talk, not going to tae kwon do, if it isn;t wednesday or saturday you are no where to be seen!
| Hotel Whiskey 8/31/11 . chapter 24
Did you know that chapter 23 and 24 are the same chapter? I'm not sure if you knew but I thought I should let you know. Once more, good chapter. It's getting very interesting and I like the idea of the draconians. Raikou's mannerisms are very adorable as well.
Till next time
| anime artist 8/31/11 . chapter 12
haha... you know I hate running. Out of curiosity is Raikou the love interest? e sort of reminds me of a brooding pariah with the self esteem of a lion...*revises words* okay that was a little weird.
| ren360 8/20/11 . chapter 1
Hey! I love it! It's so cool, and right now I could do with something interesting to read, so thanks. I'll keep reading it, and as always,
| Hotel Whiskey 8/5/11 . chapter 22
Oh yes, you are one hell of an updater. I could probably learn a lesson or two from you on timely updates.
Two things I've noticed... Or rather one thing I've noticed and one I'd like to comment on: You're inconsistent with 'thinking' when your character is thinking. Sometimes it's just in 'quotes' or othertimes its in 'quotes and italics'. I feel like I've mentioned that before and my apologies if I have. Also... My editor told me this, "unless it's in conversation don't use rhetorical questions." You had one and I thought of this so... P
Anyway, I really like the setting you put your characters into. Since they left Cananda (I suppose they're still techincally in Canada but...) it's all so... Fantisical. I love it! Now, is it just me or is something bad going to happen with the Resurrection Water?
Continuing, another new person! Yay! I wonder what they'll be like.
Until next time!
Sincerely, Antoinette Shakespeare.
| Hotel Whiskey 8/3/11 . chapter 21
Hmm. I wish my kitchen did that. Life would be so much easier. I envy Hogwarts Students for that reason. Anyway, Raikou sounds like quite the charmer. Can't wait for your next chapter.
| Hotel Whiskey 8/3/11 . chapter 20
I love the sentences in this chapter. I'm not sure why but they're amusing. "started to curse myself for following that blasted turquoise-haired guy into that blasted cave." that one is probably my favorite. And I totally agree with Tsuki's List of 5 Things she dislikes excpt for the Alcohol one. I can't agree with that.
I really want to know what Tsuki said in her sleep while Raikou was in there. Hmm, I wonder if Tsuki's sister will ever make a guest appearence. That'd be definately interesting.
| HotelWhisky 7/15/11 . chapter 18
Another new character? Or a reapperence. I wonder... I wish I had rainbow fruit. That'd be cool, but I suppose I'd freak out as well.
Since this is the last chapter you have posted, I suppose I'll stop controlling your Review's Page and leave for a bit...
Until next time,
Hotel Whisky/Antoinette Shakespear.
| HotelWhisky 7/15/11 . chapter 17
I really like the concept of different angels. It's unique and very interesting. Hmm, I wonder what happened to the nameless three angels. Is Raikous the one who went to the dark side? I'm curious.
| HotelWhisky 7/15/11 . chapter 16
Oooh, another character. Is he an angel or a magician? Both maybe? I really want to learn more about this land and whats going on. What happened to Raikou? Is he an angel too? This is all very intriguing.
| HotelWhisky 7/15/11 . chapter 15
Interesting chapter. I like the interaction between Lee and Tsuki. I wonder what he wished for. There's great character developement here. I like Pinku's attitude toward Lee all the time. It's funny.
Scary voice though. I wonder what's inside the castle.