|Reviews for The Callous Man and His Cap|
| Birdhouse in Your Soul 6/6/11 . chapter 1
OH MY GAWD BACCANO.
I think I love you.
(*raving Baccano fan.*)
| Doomsday'sMascot 6/3/11 . chapter 1
Lovely oneshot thingie. I loved the character - usually I get annoyed by characters like this, but you pulled it off just right. He's a hitman and he thinks his job is boring... I'd think boring would be the last word to describe working as a hitman. Excellent description, I think you're the first person I've heard describe bodies as falling with a 'splurch'.
It did seem a little random, I guess. First there's just a guy and a hat, then an odd girl, then BOOM! assassination. But that kind of made it cool, and gave it an almost surreal air. I like that you kept the descriptions simple, also - flowery metaphors would just ruin this scene.
Great job. :)
| Moldavite Owlet 6/1/11 . chapter 1
This is very well-written; I like your style. I already adore the character .