i loved this cause it seems so honest and raw. its chopped up in a really great way. tells a great story as well. nice work

that's kind of sad. i like the style, how it's all rushed but not really. kind of. sort of. & anyway

I like the chalk-heart on the pavement imagery. This is really sweet and I like how it comes across as simplistic but then the "do you?" leaves the reader questioning. I originally didn't like the minimal punctuation but after reading it through I actually think it works, with the pace and flow of the poem. I prefer to have capitalisation at the beginning of sentences though.