I love it

Have I told you that I love these stories? I'm sure I have but this one was just as good. And I'm so excited there's going to be another one!

amazing, of course! xD cant wait for Star Rising. and i saw in one of your notes that the heroine is a human! i think that's really cool. and the title is sorta like a hint in itself... i really love your titles. i like how succinct they are and how they capture the essence of the book yet have a tie to each other through the word "star". very nice titling. :)

huh. well, i sorta thought it would be ceres, though i thought it strange that she'd walk right into the group of people who would want to punish her.

i think faith is the most unique of your narrators so far. hmm, okay, maybe not. clementine is pretty unique too. but personality-wise, i find that faith stands out the most. she's a homemaker. ana and sophie were both fighters, though sophie was admittedly more into fighting. clementine wasn't into fighting but aside from her slight oddity caused by the demon magic, i felt that her character wasnt very catching. of course, maybe i was more distracted by all the magic and complications going on in her story and wasnt really focussing on her.

Aww that was a nice ending :) I thought it was Faith's wedding at first! I love the heights of the guys, if that's not weird of me to say. My male characters are always tall! Also, I LOVE the name Adrian and I hope he appears more in the next chapter! I can't remember if you said which characters the next one was about, but yeah, i hope he's in it heehee. Very good job on this story!

Loved your story! Can't wait till your next one is out! I think you ended it perfectly with samples and medea's wedding! :)

Hey! Great ending for the story! Can't wait for the sequel to me up! xoxo

She and Gideon are going to have a baby! Yay! This was a sweet epilogue. And finally Medea and Samuel got to get married after so many obstacles.

As for the sequel, I am very very very excited for it. Well I'm always excited for all the stories in the series but the fact that your main heroine is going to be human is exciting.

-Liz :D

Aww, Elfyn still has a crush on Faith. I can still sort of tell lol. Though I'm sure he and Elodie will soon become much closer now that he is moving to the commune which I am very glad about.

And I'm very happy that everyone, especially Evander is better.

-Liz :D

I'm so sorry it took me forever to update, I've been swamped with tests latley. I'm so close to my fall break though. :)

YES! So happy that it was Medea that killed Ceres.

The parts with Faith fighting Ceres were the best, she put up a good fight for someone who just began training not too long ago.

-Liz :D

I thought this was a very sweet ending. You really created an atmosphere, and although it moved quickly, it wasn't distracting and it worked. I really have nothing to critique for this one, i thought it was a nice, sweet ending!

Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for the epilogue! xoxo

Ahh i thought this chapter was so good! Battle scenes are difficult for me because I feel like they're too short and unexciting, but you really made it work. And I liked how it all turned out in the end, with Medea killing Ceres and stuff. Hopefull Samuel's not dead though.

Also, I don't think this story has been too short. I think if you were to extend it much more, it might even be too long. So yeah, it's the right amount!

Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Xoxo