OMGEEE I finally got to read all of Chapter 2. NUUUUUUUUUUU! River escaped! GOD that's horrible! I'm going to die in my sleep now tonight. I need to read the next chapter now to see if Mya is okay!

I smiled when the dad called her Pickle. haha it was so cute! Good job on your story by the way and really HURRY WITH CHAPTER 3 FOR THE SAKE OF THE BABIES! (yes for the sake of babies because if I don't get that chapter soon I'm going to explode into millions of pieces and all the animals are going to eat my exploded parts and after they're done with my dead remains you know what they are going after? That's right the babies. You don't wanna be a baby killer do you?) O.o

HEY! Omgeee I'm so glad you finally posted it! :D Great job btw. I still wanna know what that River creeps wants. He gives me the creeps if you hand't noticed. keep up the good work :D

-Pancake