|Reviews for White Veil Occasion|
| leah 9/15/12 . chapter 1
A guy. It definitely sounds like a guy. The whole stubborn, pride, and "i'll marry you if that's what you want" part make it seem like that. I really hope this had a happy ending.
| xXxR M GxXx 7/10/11 . chapter 1
I feel like this needs to be more then a one-shot! lol I love it. I like the fact that its so open to interpretation and can go which ever way. When I got to the end I felt as though there should be more but as a one-shot I think the ending is perfect
| BeyondtheDark 6/9/11 . chapter 1
This was absolutely fantastic. I loved the style, and i am always captivated by a unidentifiable character element in a story. Truthfully at the beginning i was getting hints of it being a girl, but then as it progressed it felt more masculine for some reason.
It seems kind of like they might have had a bitter break up, and im not too sure that the one being married wants to get back together. I can kind of see the narrator standing up to say something but then leaving, which would then leave the one at the altar wondering.
As for the last question it can go either way based on this current chapter(i think) because what if the one being married never was in real love? So how could that be a mistake, or you could have the opposite situation.
I really love the idea of this story and so i hope you progress it further than being just a one shot!
| DeadlyGlamourous 6/5/11 . chapter 1
Omggg you are so mean! leaving it there lol ugh pleaseeeee update soon! I hope they end up together :(
| Wonderstruck 6/4/11 . chapter 1
Wow, these one shots are something. your other one was amazing but i was too lazy to review it, sorry!
This one though is very good, in different ways. Well I guess if its a church it has to be a boy marrying a girl right? And somehow I feel like this is a guy speaking about a girl he loved, i don't know why i get that feeling but I do. Somehow, by the way you've been writing stories lately i feel like this story has to be a tragedy and they don't end up together. Although I do think the narrator had the courage to say something whether it be just or not. And the last question is a toughie so Imma skip it.
I think the writing style and the words is what makes this story effective. It's very deep and very honest in a way and this is how real writing is accomplished.
Good Job and well done on another story and ps i urge you to continue the burning truth, you've had me at a cliffhanger for a long time now! :)