It was very good! I loved the language and setup. The ending really hit me, though. She wanted to calm the river. Unique. Awesome job!

Beautiful, sad, and probably oh so true. It brought a tear to my eyes. I loved it and it's really good.

Insanity

I have no words besides that this was a beautiful tragedy.

This is so painful, sad and beautifully written. Maybe those are not the correct words for describing it, but I liked it.