Awesome so far! I just read the first chapter and I can't wait to read some more!

Seems like a ripoff of Naruto, but other than that it's good.%Pr

one word stinks ...just kiddin .very good discription

I thought it was pretty nice. It seemed kinda cutesy at point and I'm going so far as to adding it to my favorites-so I'm gonna read more. I gotta get some Zs. I really don't know what to correct you on as far as CC goes-because what I thought stuck out really isn't grammatically incorrect-it's just it's different than what I'd do.

And I'm not here to make you write like me. You're pretty good at writing already from what I see, I don't need to correct you. I'll be back for more.

I have come to review! dont worry, i'll stick to this story until u gave it an ending.

well, an interesting chap though not much to say, kinda bland maybe, but seeing Sora getting teased light up the mood. But still, kinda bland, need more . . er . . interest point, dude.

Ah! Poor natsumi! She's going to get killed! Grerat story! :D Keep writing!

Whooo, new chapter!

And we finally see someone who is from a village

I guess Eri is gonna be annoying anytime soon

By the way, this is me Denkosenka Kabutoraiger. I finally made an account :D

wow what for a cold dad XD

Heya :) I really enjoyed this chapter. It was humorous and exciting and well-written. Ash

huahahaha

A Short but hillarious chapter

Junpei's so stupid

And Mytube? Hahaha

Wohoo! I see some action here

Mei's appearance kinda unexpected

So Natsumi is the Empress, huh?

At first i thought it was an all girls dorm, so i thought Sora gonna dress as a girl XD

Oh, and call me Kabuto, "Denkosenka" is the title which means "lightning speed"

Natsumi's pheromone power is scary (-_-")

Well, we see new character but very little description

And sora has found her, things should get interesting.

I'm excited abwt natsumi entering school and what kind of character will appeared (like a Handsome Jerk or Saddist Headmaster)

A pretty funny chapter. I'll stay tuned to see what happen to Natsumi in the next chapter.

Yeah, all males are perverts, in this world, at least.

Louis the Magnificent

woooooow!

im so looking forward to what will happened!

and are all japanese dudes pervs?

well..anyways...pls update soon and good luck

Excellent! It seems like it could be a very interesting story! I'm looking forward to another update, and I hope it will happen soon :D Beautiful start.