the horrible part is how well i relate to this poem. but i guess it's good, in a way. it's powerful.

'but all that's going to be left/ is the skeleton she's begging to become.'

Jealous. This is wow.

I love this - the imagery, the word choice - everything. It's absolutely beautiful.

I absolutely adore this! I love the allusions to Alice in Wonderland, it was a different and wonderful way to express drug abuse...and it also fits in well with the concept that the author of Alice in Wonderland was thought to be an opium addict.

Great poem, keep writing :)

- Hearts x

small down desperate

somebody

every squeeze

locked

pills

misguided clumsy

doors

fix away

back again

one reach

up

left begging