|Reviews for Chasing the Moon Rough Draft|
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 40
My first review! After the story is over. Well, I am disappointed that the story is over at chapt. 37. It's suppose to be 40 chapters.
Maddy, I liked it am am surprised at your story telling capabilities. WOW! I didn't read the other books about wearwolfs
| Betty Seaborne 6/15/12 . chapter 4
Like so far!
| The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper 4/1/12 . chapter 40
I'm on wattpad, and it's much simpler to post then fictionpress. though if you don;t like it, then that's you choice :/. I wouldn't go on inkpop, because it's really hard for us to go to another chapter.
So I'm not sure, I was going to recommend wattpad, but i saw that you used it. Good luck in finding a new site :)
| do-you-need-to-know-my-name 2/17/12 . chapter 3
are you a mia thermapolis fan because i was thinking about the orange cat called louie because in the mia thermopapolis books theres an orange fat cat called fat louie
| musicalfishieXD 1/31/12 . chapter 3
If you care, this is my penname. I love it so far-and you kinda. Olympic spirit is SO fun to play, clarinet or trombone, and I suggest epic score. They're a band(?). But I play clarinet, I'm good at math, and I'm a swimmer! Haha couldn't help it.
| christy 1/26/12 . chapter 5
heeey! NICE chapter! i liiike it! 3
the only thing i noticed are subtle similarities to Twilight? in character traits and placement. i do, however, still ADORE this story :) and i think you've done a very good job :D
| Abrasive 1/23/12 . chapter 15
Really good story so far - the sexual tension between Cole and Caleigh is sizzling. Furthermore, you managed to characterise them both in interesting ways.
However, the story could benefit from more description to temper the dialogue. Also, there are a few things which seem very glossed over, for example, it's almost as if Caleigh has completely forgotten about Cole's healing abilities. And I find it a bit weird that Abby would encourage her friend to pursue a guy who punched her.
Also, there are a few spelling and grammatical errors you might wish to edit later on. Particularly the use of 'drug' instead of 'dragged' (a lot of people make this mistake when referring to the past participle of 'drag').
Having browsed the remaining chapters, I can see that there is going to be more of a split focus between Cole/Caleigh and Anthony/Abby. Personally, I don't like it when stories do this. I'm already invested in Cole/Caleigh so any focus on Anthony/Abby annoys and distracts me. So I'm bowing out of reading the rest. But it was definitely a worthwhile effort. Well done! :)
| Maddielala56 1/22/12 . chapter 39
Amazing story! I'm so glad I found it!
| Melody'sInMyHead 1/22/12 . chapter 38
WOW! This is unbelievable! I think I fell in love with coal! I can't believe Caleigh is a wolf, nor that Auden died! I loved this story, i really couldn't put my laptop down! You are a amazing writer and plan to check out some of your other stories! Thank you so much for this!
| aspiringauthor95 1/21/12 . chapter 38
Perfect! Just absolutely amazing. Once again you astound me with how much emotion you can get into those characters. It's just so beautiful:)
Ps. There was a little mistake at the beginning with the POV. It goes from third to first person...I'm not sure if that was intentional or what but it kinda distracted me.
| StaNdUPtomE 1/20/12 . chapter 39
Sooooo, I read the whole story, and I liked it. At times I hated Cole, I'm not sure if I liked him as character. Anothony is my more favored choice.
However I liked Cole and Caliegh's story, I liked how it progressed. I like the fact that they argued, and fought and it was not perfect.
Will their be a continuation or finish to Anthony and Abby?
I will start reading Eli's story now I'm very curious to see what happened
And I hated the fact that you killed Hannah and Auden, but it was awesome. (which makes no sense) you did not make your story a 'happily ever after' but you did make it a happily ever after. Its realistic, in love and war people die.
| Mildly me 1/19/12 . chapter 38
Gaah! I can't believe it's over! It feels like something's missing, yet somethig's also been filled inside of me. Do you ever feel like that after finishing a book/story?
And you ask for a favorite chapter? I like all of them! Gaah! I'm still mourning the end of this.
| OneChance 1/18/12 . chapter 38
I'm going to cry. You know why? Because there'll be no more notifications from this story waiting in my inbox to brighten my day when I least expect it!
This was truly a work of art. I hope you keep writing(:
| cocomoco5 1/18/12 . chapter 1
OH MY GOSH! I SO WISH YOU WOULD HAVE WRITTEN MORE. It was realllllly starting to get intense! Awwwwh, I reallly think you should either continue this story or start a new one about Cole and Caleigh. I'm personally not that interested in Eli's life.. But overall this story was AMAZING. I really hope you do continue this story, you already have a alot of people reviewing it and I bet alot of them want more!
| Mildly me 1/18/12 . chapter 37
More more more more more more more!