awsome cant wait for more

I think I speak for everyone when I ask: exactly where is that sequel? I stumbled across this yesterday, and was engrossed almost instantaneously. I was really dissapointed when I couldn't find the sequel on your profile, though... It was getting really interesting. Anyway, I really hope you haven't given up on this

Great story! I take back what I said about the mountains, though. On the other hand, this was a very exciting and fun story. BUT, I went to your profile and couldn't find the sequel. Are you still going to go through with it?

Loving this story so far. Just had to review on this chapter, though. I was laughing really hard at the part where it says:

While there were arguments and personal space issues, we generally just watched TV. The most interesting thing we watched was probably how two mountains had appeared in Greece overnight but, besides that, we had quite an uneventful few days.

Lol. I can just imagine how well that would go over! :-) I wish two mountains would appear overnight -it'd be fun to see the reactions to that. Also, I really liked the last chapter. The part where they were all locked in their Greek god/goddess states was kind of funny and really fascinating.

well this was certantly not ur best chapter it was kind of confusing with that whole aaron thing

wow defenit change in direction but i love it so far especially the romance brewing between henri and mia

It doesn't really seem funny to me.

This chapter was fairly interesting only kept my attention a little bit during the action scenes they didn't excit me that i didn't feel like i was actually there it was abitboring but the outlines were very interesing i like where this story is going

Good very good it not really that strange, and liked how you put the twist on it by having Artemis come out though it might make things confusing ill see

There is a few problem this chapter didn't really have a point to it. and if phobe was aphrodite then she should've known that you never ever where white high heels whereing white pumps is like female suicide. and i do not think that I's is a proper conjunction no one is going to take you seriously if you dont you proper grammer. this chapter had good detaling though.

i belive that it dragged on a bit but other thsn that it was pretty good.

I really liked it your really creative but you could be a bit more discriptive.

this was a phenomenal story! i really dont know why you dont have more reviews because your interpretation of greek mythology is fantastic! amazing job!

LoveloveloveloveLOVED IT!

I think it was great!

Artemis is my fave greek god anyway, but I love the way you narrated her, and the whole general story!

Well done!

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-Anna

Even though I have practically dropped off the face of Fictionpress from a busy life, I have finished your story in ONE day! again and I will have to admit that it was SO great, I loved the Hestia scene so much that I just wanted to hop right into it and huggle Hestia to death! XD and now I am off to read your second story of the Trilogy! What what!