| Reviews for d a i n t y ' s t a r b e a m s |
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SettleThePetals 5/21/12 . chapter 5I love how you draw it all together with the last line. Very powerful. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 8Sad yet hopeful. This had made me think and thank you for sharing this. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 7This is amazingly sweet and thank you for sharing this with me. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 6This had made me think. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 5This had made me think. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 4This is a sweet thought thank you for sharing this. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 3Sad at first I was thinking of a skittles commercial and then I was sad. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 2This is sweet and it is written quite well. Thank you for sharing this. |
True Talker 5/7/12 . chapter 1Thank you for sharing this. |
recycle rhymes 2/14/12 . chapter 3I love the metaphor and imagery in this chapter, well written! |
Sepulchred 9/9/11 . chapter 6I refused to review the previous few chapters, because all I'd be doing is repeating myself again, which I seem to be doing a lot lately. I like how your pillow book has got a theme. |
Sepulchred 9/9/11 . chapter 2'Yet, she showered you with Skittles and drenched you in raspberry velvet, while always softly humming lullabies of cinnamon to the moon.' Now, seriously, this is ridiculous. Where do you get these lines from? What creature are you? I'm jealous. |
Sepulchred 9/9/11 . chapter 1I don't care, I'm reviewing anyway. You've always got such beautiful imagery and I always feel the need to point that out. Just one thing: 'nothing else can' goes better with the tense you've used. |
Cecelia Hawk 7/27/11 . chapter 4I really like this. It's a ray of sunshine for me. I'm glad you can accept yourself and that you are experiencing joy. I hope it continues. I too am trying to accept myself and I think that it's going well. |
TakenbytheWind 6/20/11 . chapter 1This is lovely. |