This was great! They are so ctue together! I hope that you write a sequel, even if it's just a one-shot. :)

This is probably one of the awesomest stories I have ever read. You do need to write a sequel especially because Kassha and Yelnoir didn't actually get married and we don't get to hear about Kasshas adventures. So please pretty please with a cherry on top WRITE A SEQUEL!

Mmmm a good and fun story, to me sure! :D Certainly enjoy reading this one

Wonderful story:) Thank you for such great work:))

i love this story sooo much. one of my new favorites. you should do a seqeul

Kassha is a mary-sue. That's all I'm offering right now.

You have fallen into the trap of the mary-sue.

Kassha is a wonderful, beautiful, cultured, one of the best dancers, with a voice like a rainbow of sound.

Llulshad's character isn't explored nearly enough for my liking either. Where are their personality quirks, their likes and dislikes?

Kassha description doesn't help either. Beautiful brown hair and all that. Detail is good, but when it is only about your character,it isn't very welcome.

And the most common happening in a mary-sue is when they have more than one middle name.

I'm totally serious.

Where is the girl's stubborness and why haven't you expanded on Kassha's brothers? Where is their interaction other than sword practice?

Come on girl, you can do better than this. I'm sure you can.

Oh, and read some Mary-sue parodies. They're all over the place. Just type in mary-sue and you'll get loads. That way, you can read up on what mary-sues are and all that.

Even if you do know about mary-sues and their symptoms, you'll have to do a lot better job at avoiding it.

Ciao

aw, that's it? i feel like it's just the beginning!

Very nicely done. I would rank it close to the top of my favourite story list. The descriptions were simplistically marvelous. The tone of the story was engaging too.

Awwwwwww I LOVED this story. It was absolutely amazing. And I look forward to a sequel if you get the chance to write it and finish it. Kassha is a strange princess but she's an awesome strange princess. I loved the ending it fit so neatly into the whole tale. I'm a little bit sad that this was so short but I look forward to your next story.

This story is very interesting, I really ejoyed it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Go Kassha, go Kassha, go Kassha...wooo hoo! Amazing! I don't think I would have been able to just charge in the middle of poachers like that! And Akrindi must look so cute in it's chick state...Awwwww. I wonder what happened to the poachers? Awesome chapter...this story is keeping me on my toes. I'm definitely getting practice in expecting the unexpected here.

Poor Llulshad, she has to go find the wayward yet gutsy princess. I'm glad it finally got a chance to tell the king a thing or two. I was cheering for it all the way for facing up to the king. And I Loved the part about the acid it spits out. What an interesting ability. I wonder why Kassha decided to face the phoenix on her own?

So excited to see what's next! I really love the way she's pushing at the boundaries of the society she lives in and I wish Kassha all the best

Aww I wish Kassha could give him a chance-seeing as how he's the only one who really wanted Kassha...for Kassha. It seemed that Llulshad took a slight offense to Yelnoir implying that Kassha wasn't quiet, graceful, cultured, etc. (Actually I kinda laughed at that part because I thought it was funny...) I feel sorry for Yelnoir too...he really tried. Oh well...I just have to wait and see what happens I can't wait for the next chapter.

poor guy... he seemed awfully nice too...