Depressing and creative. I'm not familiar with Edward Gorey, but if this is inspired by his works, I should probably check it out. This was an interesting read.

A very nice piece of poetry. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I really like this. I must say my favourite line is "L is for lose, your mind to insanity". I think it's good that the rhyme scheme is constant, and it also has a very clear rhythm. I can't think of anything bad to say about it! Well done :)

Love.

This.

So.

Much.

That Words Cannot Describe.