| Reviews for Hardly Star Crossed |
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hitsukarin4lyf 4/23/13 . chapter 6i love it update soon tylers parents are AWESOME! |
TaraLin89 11/3/11 . chapter 6GAHHH WHERE'S THE REST OF IT? Please don't tell me you abandoned this! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
TaraLin89 11/3/11 . chapter 4So I was going to wait until after I was done reading the story to review but this chapter was just sooooo darn cute I couldn't wait. xDDD I was literally bouncing and squealing (yes, I'm that big of a dork) on my bed when reading the part about them in the locker room. I can't wait to see what happens! I'll add another review when I get to the end of the Chapter 6 :) |
awildrose 7/3/11 . chapter 6I love where this story is going! Write another chapter woman! xD Love ya! |
Literature Freak 6/28/11 . chapter 6Well first off thank you for reviewing my story! Also you're welcome! I thought this chapter was good and I like Tyler's parents. I like how you started the chapter with Tyler's viewpoint of the shower scene. I liked how you showed what Tyler was thinking during it. I will be greatly anticipating the next chapter. |
Esquirella 6/28/11 . chapter 6Wow! LOL! Tyler's parents are definitely unexpected. Cool update! |
Literature Freak 6/27/11 . chapter 5This chapter and chapter 4 were both good. I really liked how you told chapter 5 in Cassandra's point of view. I really liked how you got into detail on her home life. I think that the next chapter will be good to see what Tyler thinks about and it will be a change from Leif's story. I like how you are incorporating each character into the story and it is good that you are giving all of them a voice and not just making them minor background characters. |
Esquirella 6/27/11 . chapter 5Cassandra's home life is terrible! Poor girl! |
Me 6/20/11 . chapter 4 OMIGOD! omigod! OMIGOD ! if you dont write faster i might die ! |
Esquirella 6/20/11 . chapter 4Tyler loses points for being a tool while his friends beat Leif up. |
Literature Freak 6/19/11 . chapter 3Great chapter! My only problem with it is that it is kind of short, but other then that it is really good! |
Esquirella 6/17/11 . chapter 2Off to a great start! |
Literature Freak 6/17/11 . chapter 2I really like this story so far and the humor in it is really good. I enjoy the plot and it seems that it will be different then most slash stories on here. I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. :) |