|Reviews for Surrealism via late for work|
| simpleplan13 7/14/12 . chapter 1
I liked the piece. I think you describe a lot of different things you might see in one part of a city. It's great because you describe each one so well (I especially love the sorority girl part), but they are so different from each other. I like how it goes from this broad portrait of all sorts of people to this person in specific though I wish there was more of a transition there. I think something to connect the man to the scene you just described in between those to stanzas might help connect it a bit more.
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| SmashedIce.X 6/22/11 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good! I've read some of your other work and the imagery you use is just amazing. :)