Hiiii! It's me, Caecilia, here again!

Dixie, I must say, when I saw you had deleted everything, I was simply shocked. But now I get it. And it kinda makes me want to redo Four Girls.

Maybe I will. It has no plot, anyway.

PM me!

-I2

Nice story overall; very creative. I like the idea of elemental charges and healing doves, but everything seems rather rushed and I got confused some of the time. Maybe you should pace it a little more slowly and let us get to know the characters better.

How Alicia did that- Confusion is coming- Her mom and dad are both Earths, and she was raised up in a huge mansion and she leard lots of stuff ans she learned how to shift earth, like make the earth throw them somewhere but them actually staying feet on the ground after the balloon crahed. *Panting*

How about for Book 2 you have them return to the class with proof that Doves and Airs exist. Adam and Aurora meet new friends in the next school year. Then they could have an adventure when Mrs. Kulium returns for revenge and the doves come to fight by their side. Hm?

Oh, my-!

I can't pretend I didn't know that was going to happen. It had to happen. But- wow.

This was great. Wow, it's over! Well, FG won't be over for, like, ever, so you still have that to look forward to.

You're welcome for Alicia. I liked her.

Aside from being depressing and totally KTE-ish, that's a bit confusing. Though Aurora is Healing, she can't bring people back from the dead?

I don't suppose it makes sense.

I like it, though. Wow. I just...

Wow.

That was... random...

Haha

ILY Alicia! Although teleportation is SO Psychic...

I can just Imagine Livin' on a Highwire playing during the -EPICAL- Battle scene, until Adam is thrown off course. Then, a hard rock song would play as Aurora's eyes changed colors and the Doves attacked Mrs. Kulim.

For some reason, it did not put on as it was supposed to. Please forgive me.

Nice.

Yow, that IS short. Maybe I'll do a short FG chapter. I think I should...

Arianna, hmm? What happened to Alicia?

Oh, well, I like Arianna way better.

Wait! Wait! The battle CAN'T start yet, you still need two more Doves!

Alicia and the other one.

(JK, btw)

*snort*

Haha, Adam confesses! I love how smug I am...

Chino's short, muahahaha!

One more thing (which I should have mentioned in Chapter 4):

Niice with the watch. Humph, Chloe!

I'm loving this more and more with each chapter!

Oooh, eclipse! Solar, I might add. The one that's dangerous at which to look.

You know I love to make my characters orphans (or at least separated from their parents). Yay, Linds is a Fire! Sasha, much?

Actually, in the story to which I am most addicted (and that I'm co-authoring), we have a character named Lindsay. She's real, of course. She can control fire, along with ice and time. She's a sorceress. Oh.



Yay!

Aaah, Psychic is my fave. (So explain to me why I'm Poison...! Ah, never mind...)

I'd love to see some Poison, just to be me-ish. Because you know me!

Lucky them, I forgot that everyone has a power in here. I want one! In FG, mine's Poison. (You can guess: that makes me whom, now? Or is it who?) In real life, mine's Psychic.

I wish.

Careful again. Adam and SHE, not Adam and her. Or she and Adam, either one (I think).

Keep writing, I love it.