|Reviews for How i died|
| xXHistoryGeekXx 6/23/11 . chapter 3
It's not THAT bad... *quietly looks down and twiddles fingers*
God. I'd hate being a zombie x_x I'd kill myself if I weren't already dead.
| xXHistoryGeekXx 6/23/11 . chapter 2
I should've known.
It was really good chapter, but it would have been better if you added more detail. Like how she was feeling when her sister died, or when her mother dumped her on the yard (I would've used the cranky neighbour's, but whatever), or when her sister came back to life. :O
Because, honestly, I'd be totally freaking out. I'd go all ninja on them zombies! *does karate chop*
| xXHistoryGeekXx 6/20/11 . chapter 1
YOU. MUST. WRITE. LONGER. CHAPTERS! *shakes fist as angrily like old man* What is WRONG with you, woman? WRITE. LONGER. CHAPTERS!
It was good though :3 Very good. I rather enjoyed it.
*starts talking in fake British accent and acts civilized like English teacher* Oh, and this is for the mother: I believe the proper term, my dear, is "nothing to worry about my ASS."
That is all. *presses random button that makes everything go black*
| Lia Jenson 6/20/11 . chapter 1
This is a very nice setup for an epic plot. I kind of like the dialogue of this mom of hers. Brutally frank. Keep writing!
By the way, I'll point this out because this is the stuff that degrades some quality writing:
"The fifth day, they would be found dead in there beds" There I think should be "Their" and in the title/summary you didn't capitalize the I's. That would be okay if you COULDN'T capitalze it, but then I read the "How I died"...there is no excuse.
FEEL MY GRAMMAR NAZI WRATH!