This is really, really good. But...it's very strange as well, but I can see it's a little poetry, and a little bit narrative. I really like it. It reminds me of something Nikki Giovanni would do if she wrote a small summary of summer.

this is really good. i love the line "we're best friends forever & never" as well as, well, the whole first stanza, really. good job, looking forward to another one.

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