|Reviews for Second Choice|
| Alanis 4/8/12 . chapter 1
I've already reviewed this story so i had to do this (: i really love your story. I hope you think of making this a full fledged story ! I promise I'll review each chapter :)
| DorkExpress 10/18/11 . chapter 1
Wow... its so true.
The guy she likes puts her second while the guy who likes her is her second... life.
| Alanisaur 8/22/11 . chapter 1
I woukd love fo you to expand on this. Make the whole story where shes there for him and trn one day shr ges sick of it. An he realizes he really does want her.! xD ALERT LIST!r ges sick of it. An he realizes he really does want her.! xD ALERT LIST!
| CrazyInkSplatters 7/14/11 . chapter 1
I love this one shot. The protagonist's emotions really cut to the core of the reader, and help you experience a little bit of what she feels for this guy, and knowing she's only a conciliation prize. I'll admit it, as much as I adore angst, I was hoping for a happy-ending. Still, this is amazing just the same. The only thing I think you can improve on is describing his actions in better depth, like how he especially has chooses his current girlfriend over the friend, every time. Again, love it!
| White Alchemist 7/9/11 . chapter 1
Damn, if only the girl would do something. :( But I like the angst in that story. :D
| GermanSam 6/24/11 . chapter 1
I like this a lot even though it didn't have the typical happy ending I was secretly wishing for in the end. And then I remembered: you wrote it. So no happy ending in sight but it still good in a very powerful emotion sort of way. It had plot and I have a strange feeling that this theme is based off of a real life thing. I don't know how true this is but I hope it's not completely true. It's quite sad. :( Emoticon used!
Sad but good.
| jadetryton 6/23/11 . chapter 1
You did a fantastic job defining the conflicting emotions of this situation. I've been that girl... and you did it perfect justice.
| Melf 6/23/11 . chapter 1
Good job! You write the feelings very well, although names might help. Keep writing!