THE HAIKU IS WRONG IT IS SUPPOSED TO B O AND THAT ONE IS 6 5 5.

your middle line.. as a haiku.. was supposed to have 7 syllables and it had 8.. otherwise it was good

I think 'Pencils' was my favorite haiku you wrote.

This is my second work that i've read by you, and i must say that you really have talent. Stuff like this never gets enough attention.

Please update soon! I'd like to see more.

Melanie Q

Hiya, itz et! Wazzup?

I do not like to eat squash!

Anyways, i luv da haikus! I luv poetry, although mine sucks on high.

Well ya. Theres ur first review! :):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):)

ET