Nice shortie - slightly cliche, but overall a nice piece.

yeah! That's a real guy, a one who can choose the best girl for him and never look back!

i really loved this story! I think it was sweet how you put it. Perhaps you could have more detail (Not that i'm any good at detail :P) but overall i really enjoyed reading this!

I really love this story. And I've had some guys like that and met some girls like that. Awesome work on getting such strong characters in a short story. You should continue with this romance genre, you're really good at it.

*"I lied in bed" should be "I lay in bed". At least I'm pretty sure that's what it should be.