|Reviews for Life Without|
| Allyson Parker 6/25/11 . chapter 1
That's awesome. Love it. I want to steal your brain... (new status update, 'I want to steal your brain...')
| Homura Kitsune 6/24/11 . chapter 1
Seems like it would be a pretty boring life to me.
Personal ideas aside, the poem itself has a nice flow to it because of the repetition, but I wonder if you could have a few lines in between to break it up a little bit. Maybe turn the lines you have now into a sort of chorus or refrain.