nice, a little bit of oedipus , great story. I love the letters between janoah and Xenos ( do you pronounce it Z-ea-nos?) The thing about dragons and cats is very charming and true.

woah, did not see that one omg you need more than five!

WHERE IS THE EPILOGUE? THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN A LONG time!

Nice. I like the open ending quite a bit, but you should get a beta, that will help with a few errors floating around. And it's fantastic that you avoided using the word 'causing.' malot of new writers beat a story to death with that damn word.

Happy ending! :) I have to say this is one of the best stories [and one of my favs!] I have ever read! xD I'll be waiting for the epilogue how ever long it takes xDD Awesome job over all, under all and all over! XD Keep writing!

-Vy

Well. Can't a girl have a panic attack when so many things are missing? Harrumph.

I only joined in reading this story a couple of chapters before, so it was already near the end and wanted to review, it's just... it's been hectic.

But I did enjoy reading the chapters ;)

I really liked how you put the story together, especially the letters! They're fun to read and shows the side of the characters which we wouldn't see otherwise. So I really, really liked them! :)

Hope you'll have enough time to do your edits and the epilogue ;P

Have a nice day, full of inspiration!

Ah, I'm a little sad that this is the ending. It was a really good story and I'm looking forward to reading you're edited version when you get around to that, cause its bound to get better. :)

Anyways, spotted one type, second-to-last line: "...a kiss on the cheek ME a good place..." think it should be "...a kiss on the cheek BE a good place..."

Anyways, adding it to my favourites, cause it was a favourite from this site. :)

... Oh, wait, it IS over. Awww. I wanted the ball and the wedding and the wizard and fairy and uncle being punished and whatnot! You can't get all of that in a short epilogue! Could you maybe do the ball showing the subjects and stuff, and THEN the epilogue? And when he wakes up... And Janoah's first kiss with him, etc.

It'd be interesting, sure, but I kind of like this sappy lovey covey thing with hints of mystery of both of their pasts. Such a pity that his heart melting had to be like this. At first, I hated how stupid the prince person was, but he's much better than his uncle. Somehow, though, I get the feeling that this is not over.

I loved this chapter. :3

It was very exciting. :)

Oh! And I found the A/N at the top funny... not sure why it just made me lol. shrugs I'm just weird like that... :p

I'd love a story about how the King killed his parents and why, and I'd love to see some novellas in this little world. :)

And I'm looking forward to the re-editing. :) It's like a story of but the author only got the first three done before stopping, but I thought the re-edited version was much better... anyways, not the point. Sorry. Um... anyways, a potential favourite story (have to wait for the ending)and looking forward to the next part. :D

I like how you combined Sleeping Beauty with Beauty and the Beast. It's an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Ullo dearest Bethany! I have absolutely no idea if I have EVER reviewed but I have been following this story most the way I believe! :) And if I ever reviewed I must've said that I love this story which I most certainly still do! :)

I was starting to believe that Janoah would pop in just in time to save Xenos. It started poking in my brain when she hid behind the tapestry. But even if it was somewhat predictable it shows that she truly does care for Xenos despite his face :) And coldness.

The ending sentence made me laugh because I remember all the times when I'm out in the summer and say "I'm melting!" The only difference is that I don't get consumed into darkness xP

UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! or else I /will/ track you down and you'll never see the light of day again. But then you wouldn't be able to update so I guess I'll just have to torture you in my secret underground lair. :) Hope for the best.

-Vy

I think that's a great idea! I would also love to see the characters really fleshed out. it seems rather sudden and rushed but with some small editing you could have an awesome story on your hands! It's definitely original enough! :)

I just read this all today, but I can't wait for the next chapter! Does he mean that his heart is melting?

And why did the king burn the letter? That meanie. Haha.

Teehee I'm also glad that they finally got to meet each other. Now they can fall in lurv XD