this is an okay story,but you need serious help with a beta

story is getting good. i been there and know what it feels like to be hurt by the one your love. cant what to read what going to happen

Great story! though try double checking spelling error and the right way to use the words

It's advice... And I can't wait whats next! 3

hmmmmmmmm that sneaky boy!

one thing tho-im a big girl i can handle myself reminds me of nelly furtado :)

hmmmm I'm wondering if I should trust Gabby...

Thanks for the shout-out!

Hmmmm I think...Felicia?

I guess I'll just have to wait and see though...oh the suspense!

Awww man I was about to click on 'next' to go to the next chapter and to my (unwanted) surprise, there is no next chapter. Ahem, I think you knkow what that means...:)

I wish my dad could be like that... (*grumbles to myself*)

He might pass the test whatwith having Italian blood and all :)

But...I have to admit I like Dana's dad :) It's how I imagine Italian dads lol

ok New fave life quote:

Because life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. Its about learning to dance in the rain.

Love it!

The tension is escalating-good chapters ma'am!

I'm starting to feel suspicipus about this Mr. Adonis...

Awwww Italian love 3

Pretty good plot thus far! I'm wondering if you wil delve into the psychology behind accsuing individuals of crimes they did not commit and the outcome of those accusations.

Ashlin is so annoying! What is her problem but great chapter :)