 Puppy Blu 2003-04-27 . chapter 1Very Beautiful, poetic. Love It! ^_^ |
 Phantashea 2002-04-16 . chapter 1My own thoughts put into words litteratly.
I know for some people it's hard to imagine but they have to start listening to those of us that do. |
 Suicidal Butterfly 2002-03-17 . chapter 1This poem makes a lot of sence to me. Something not to many people focus on. Good job. Nicely written |
 pygmalion 2000-07-06 . chapter 1love it! it's still my favourite from you. |
 Catalina Storm (10) 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 Whoa . . . deep. |
 Christy_986 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 It's great! |
 Gold14 (10) 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 That is too good, it deserves more than a 10. Very good job. |
 BigJim (6) 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 Definatley on the mark! should have expored a little deeper.
Relook this in a few months, remember what you wanted to convey and finish it, you left alot unsaid. |
 Earth Firefly 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 Good. Nicely done. |
 Lhia 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 Beautiful. Well said. I believe this to be one of your best. I am there, too.....(She types furiously with chipped nails).....and, I like it. |
 mystyque leoness(10) 2000-04-11 . chapter 1 it's beautiful |