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| Reviews for Eaten Alive |
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   JeSsThEfLaMe 7/26/11 . chapter 1this is the best fiction press story I have read so far! good job! :D |
| slave to the voices 6/26/11 . chapter 1 "She walked over to the river that flown(?) at the side of her house and sat on the bank." There's something wrong about that sentence. (I don't think flown is the right word in that spot.) Other than that, you've done a nice job here. Some people may say that you need to tell them more at the end. Don't listen to them, in some stories it's good to leave things to the reader, this is one of them. Keep writing. |
| Sophia Alexandra 6/26/11 . chapter 1 wow that was scary and gruesome. wondering what the things were that were eating her. is there going to be more? check out my writing too if youre interested! |
| NeonAngels 6/26/11 . chapter 1 Huh... interesting stuff zombies maybe? going to mah favorites, tho! ;L |
