You updated! /cheers

Edward. NO. Bad Edward. (At least I think so lol)

No haunting people's nightmares and stuff.

God Edward.

Me during the nightmare sence:

Wut.

Is

Going

On.

HEY VOICE. STOP FIGHTING WITH SHORTY *cough* SKYE'S INVISIBLE BEST FRIEND.

GOSH DARN IT.

Great chapter again, it's great to have ya back. :D

Your FINALLY here.
Well, it's good still. I didn't see any errors to speak of so,
I look forward to the next chapter.

So number one, I feel guilty. :,D

It's been like three or four months since you updated this and I've only JUST reviewed it! oAo

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All better. owo

Alright! So first on the hit list would be that
I can relate to what Skye ent through in the beginning of he chappie, as if you tried to put a dress on ME you would be losing some fingers and/or toes. o3o

Secondly, CONFETTI FOR PUBLIC HUMILIATION! :DDDDD

And finally:

Update. w. :3

Hello! :) Returning your review. There were a few things I noticed here and there with your writing, and I'll point out a few below.

[ Bradley stopped for a moment before releasing me basically stuff me into a crevice. ] Small thing, but I feel like a comma is missing here and that 'stuff' should be stuffing.

[ In front of us were huge stalactites and stalagmites that went from floor to ceiling and you could only tell which they were if you look closely. They were that big. I couldn't believe it. ] I really would have liked some more description of the place here. "Like a forest" offers some, but at the same time I'm picturing big, bushy trees, and not really large rocks jutting out from the ceiling and out of the ground. Maybe a few things to mention would be the size of the cave itself, sounds, etc.

Also, at the beginning, I was a bit confused by Bradley, and thought maybe there should have been more of an introduction to who he was.

Other than that, it's an interesting premise, wonder where this is going to go. :)

- Lenni

This was good, I have like it since I read it. Also, thanks for helping me out. Your writting style it wonderful and real good. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is so awesome that other authors who try to make their's better than yours have to wear sunglasses to prevent going blind from the radiation of your awesomeness!

X3

As usual, epically epic in every way. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chappie!

I hope the Edward Cullen-thingie gets hit by a truck...

PM me anytime!

Amber Icefire

If Faolan dies I am going to have a heart attack! I love her so much...

I love how you can really connect with your characters! It's amazing how well you can write!

No creeper Edward thingie in this chappie! Yay! *hates him so much*

Take your time with updating! I'm going through exams right now so I know how it feels...

Fabulous as usual!

Poor Skye...now her brother hates her...

Ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew!

I hate you Edward Cullen thingie! *stabs*

Sorry about that... *doesn't like Twilight...* ;.;

Words can't describe how awesome you are!

;D

Awesome, but have I expected any less of you thus far?

What happened to her? Why was she hospitalized? (how did she get sick)

Must...keep...reading...

And throwing any haters in the furnace where they belong. B3

Cause who could hate this story?

Weirdos probably. X3

Pure. Awesomeness.

Aww, if you ever have Writer's Block again, just tell me and I'll help you out!

Faolan is now one of my favorite characters! I don't know why, she's just well portrayed!

Ew. If the pheline looks like Robert Pattinson, I hate him. Intensely. With every fiber of my being.

So yeah.

Epic story so far!

Fantastic first chappie, I can't wait to read more!

This is a great start, you must be a really talented writer because I've been writing ever since I could hold a pencil and I've never been so good at starting anything off!

You're definitely going on my favorites list!

BAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! I see your french and COD leaking out there XP lol

AWWWWWWIES FOR THE Braskye moments! (Or is it Skyely?) lol

AND HURRAH FOR PUPPIES! :D also, you should totally do a picture of the wolfies and Skye :) I would do one, lol, but it would be an embarrassment next to your awesome art powers ,,,,, lol

GREAT CHAPTER! FINAAALLLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY! ... :P

*sits back down from doing happy dance* alright then,,,, now to wait another month for the next update -.- ;P

ta'

Azetta

Heyy :) Great story so far! I like your style of writing as it flows really well and your characters are well done. Know how you feel on the revew front but keep at it, your story is good :) One suggestion that you can heed or disregard is when you are relating the thoughts and feelings of a character maybe try drawing out the process of them changing their mind a little longer, just so it doesn't jump from one point of view to the next. But really good stuff I look forward to the nxt chapter :D

1. short chapters? you're killing me! smiting me down!

2. I didn't see any mistakes

3. great chapter! (Even if it was short PPPPPPP ) finallly, 'IT' is going away XD

Must admit i'm still kinda confused about pack, flock and else wise- I still adore Faolan and how everyone has a familiar or two! I love that!

AND FAOLAN HAD HER PUPPIESSS YAHOOO!

Question: is there a chance of some star-crossed lovers romance in this cuz i feel like that's what it's building up to, but that's probably just me, ne?

so anyway, you should say "Screw 'IT'" and just write a gazzillion of chapters, kay?

KAY? ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME? I WANT YOU, RIGHT THIS MINUTE, TO GO ALL TERMINATOR ON THE KEYBOARD.

Cool, thanks

Yours truly-duly

Azetta

I swear, it was only a twizzler- I don't know why I'm so hyper...okay, maybe it was an airhead and a pakc of skittles and barbeque chips

Oh and of course by 'IT' I mean your writers block ;) what else could i be talking about?

Dear WritingKnightmare-who-writes-kick-ass-characters

When you said: ' you can borrow aidan' I was like...uhhh, this is starting to sound bad... To be clear, i am not a pedo O XD

moving on though _

Once again though, I love Faolin- she has to beat her 'man' into shape! aka, Conan. Pregnant wolf ftw!

Also, i felt like in between the part where Aidan is awarded with the adorable pooch, Conan, and then the part where she's training him- i felt like it was a huge emotional jump. sorta like one second she's thinking 'Oh yeah, i'm going to train him to be awesomesauce at this!' and then next she's like 'should i be doing this?'. Idk, trying to be helpful and failing i think...

also, again, yeah, i just wanted to check with you if it's cool if i use the Changeling word? Cuz, in my one-shot of Kitalla, she's oftan called a 'changeling' cuz she's a Natural with the freaky eyes. I'm dying to get the one shot done, but waiting on my beta is taking a while and I'm not sure i want to go much farther with out stuff like the ring and Michael, Muruta and Misaki Kitalla explained.

Idk

Anyhoo, freaking long review i knwo, right? GREAT CHAPTER THOUGH! KUDOS TO AIDAN CUZ HE'S AWEEESOMEAUUUUCE! And so is Faolin of course3

GOOD LUCK AT YOUR COFFEE HOUSE-uh, thingy? (what is it?)

Azetta

ps. I noticed how you added COD in the beginning and i was like: of course...what else would he be playing XD