I know I'm not supposed to laugh, because it's kind of tragic, but OMG! That was so funny! I thought he was going to chase her! Apparently not! Oh, Cinderella... You should have moved into the castle. That way, he definitely wouldn't have forgotten you! Or gotten another date!

Omg! You write amazing poetry! I wonder why you didn't tell me before...?

Nice. :) I mean, don't get me wrong, I love me some Disney, but this WAS a more realistic ending (and a clever way of saying it, to boot). :D Nice job!

-Spontaneous Juju

WTH! why didnt u tell me u posted this!

This is such a good poem, and very relatable too. You should be impressed that I like it, since I usually hate poems. It's really good though! You're a great poet :D