Um.. Wow? Great job!

I believe you have the beginning of something here. Although, maybe not a finished work?

The correct spelling is "peek", if you mean look. Other than that, I couldn't find any other mistakes.

In my opinion, this poem wasn't the best but it wasn't terrible either. Keep writing and your poetry could get better!

It seems like this poem ended on a hopeful note. That's the general mood I got from it. So if that's the mood you were aiming for at the end, then you've done well in conveying what you want to say.

Thanks for reading my review!