| Reviews for Her |
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Reel Wander 8/20/12 . chapter 1nice poem, I've not been reading for awhile lol my bad I think I've read this, I don't know why I have not done a review on it, again my bad I can definitely feel the emotion from it, like eyes staring right back at me, asking if I feel it and get it, raw emotion seething inside |
Stormfeather 10/30/11 . chapter 1This reminds me of how people change over time. |
BolognaGuy 7/12/11 . chapter 1This is a powerful poem. You put a lot of emotion into your words. I really like the three-line sentence format you chose; it brings a sense of consistency to your work. For me, the most powerful line is the final one. I like how you italicized and capitalized the word, "Her." It adds to the piece's derisive tone. I look forward to reading more of your work. :) |
Part-time Perfectionist 7/11/11 . chapter 1Really beautiful! It almost sounded like a song at some parts (haha, there goes the musician in me... ). I love the emotion in it, and it almost makes me wonder if I'm someone's "Her". (I hope I'm not... D:) |
Anonymous Koalas 7/4/11 . chapter 1This was a really nice poem, simply written. Only a select few words, but those words were perfectly chosen, and made the message concise and strong. Loved the balance in the lines: Are you happy/With your blessing/ From a horrid mistake? The message was also completely relatable (at least to me :) ), and that's what makes the best poems for me. Lisee xx |
Ice Bubble 7/1/11 . chapter 1I love the whole rhyming pattern, though once or twice it didn't match. But the poem itself was written rather exquisitely. :) |