That was amazingly scary, if that even means anything. loved the suspense.

OHHHHHHH, ok I kept reading and re-read a few missed key facts. No discrepancies!

Sorry!

Cheers, Jenny.

(Sorry, I'm to lazy to login so I will review on anon)

Just a small question, (and I'm only on Chapter 19), you mention in Ch 1 that an Abigal Mason who I'm assuming to be the grandmother was found dead in the house, slaughtered, like the rest of the family. However, in Chapter 19 the family is mourning her passing.

I'm a little confused by this discrepancy.

Thanks, Jenny

Chilling, you are but an ardent and incredible practitioner of minimalist writing. Truly, less is more. I salute you dear sir/madam and wish you nothing but success in all your future writing endeavours.

wow! I just don't know what else to say... I stayed up late reading Bruja then I read Diablo and I really like how you write. This is the first story I've read on fictionpress and I'm glad it's complete and it did not disapoint me. Keep it up :)

THIS WAS AWESOME! I love how you wrote the story, and the story itself was well thought out...I'm going to read the Prequel...So I'll review that...Bye!

CHACHACHACHA THIS IS AWESOME

TRIPLE WOWZA! I'M SOOOOO GOING TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES

DOUBLE WOWZA! 8)

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I LIKE THE ICE TEA THING! YOU R AWESOME! 8)

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WOWZA

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SO FAR SO GOOD! I SAW THE GREAT REVIEWS SO THIS MUST BE AWESOME!

I loved this story so much! Seriously, as you kept updating, I got more and more hooked. Excellent job! I can't wait to read Bruja.

Man, this is one of the best horror stories I ever read in my life! This creeps me out a little. This is my first story I read here, at . So, I'm new.

Oh dear! *sad face* that was a beautifully tradgic ending. Great job!