I really enjoyed it! It was wonderfully angsty and insightful, and I love the way you played with words. My favorite part was 'I went away, a way, my way - not yours. I sold my soul to the cold - I was comfortably dumb and numb.' It would've been great if it were longer, but it's still amazing.

Loved the start of it the words are very relatable and real, they hold a lot of emotion that comes alive as you read it. I did think the end was a little rushed compared to the start but that is just me nit picking, overall i enjoyed it a lot. Keep writing.