|Reviews for stranger|
| the way you look at me 8/7/11 . chapter 1
I love this. Excellent word choice, the second stanza plus the last, one line ending is great.
| chaos called creation 7/15/11 . chapter 1
The sense of longing is so palpable in this piece.
Love your pen name by the way
| arrhythmias 7/6/11 . chapter 1
oh, i love this one. it's sweet, and the happiness is refreshing. it's been a while since i've read legitimately /happy/ poetry, you know? :)
| Dr. Sweet 7/3/11 . chapter 1
Reminds me of my own thoughts about a close friend, i like it