WOAW... Well, I'm really sorry to comment now but I was so focused and I read your two stories without stopping (Well, except for school, but it's not entirely right cause I read it between two classes...)

Anyway, your story is amazing ! The characters all have their own mentality and it doesn't change through the story and we can get very attached to them.

WHY DID YOU KILL TRISTAN ?! TELL ME WHY YOU ARE SO CRUEL, EVIL, BUT ALSO A STUPID GENIUS (yeah, I know it doesn't make any sense) but you made me cry like a baby ! The tears never stopped pouring from my eyes all the night ! And every time you mention him I'm shaking with tears that threat to fall from my eyes...

Anyways, your story is one of the best I ever read (and I read a lot) so please continue that way !

Ps : sorry for the mistakes I surely made in this comment, english is not my first language, I'm French (Well, I also have English origins but, you know, I am not controlling this language as perfectly as french so... :D)

This is AMAZING! U defo need to write more! Can't wait! :) xxx

I felt rather lame when I realized my computer was the reason I didn't even see chapter 16...it decided to mess with me and showed me chapter 16 of the previous story, and no matter how many times I refreshed, it just wouldn't budge. Anyway, now that it finally stopped getting on my nerves and making an idiot out of me, I could finally enjoy these last two chapters. Awesome work, as usual, and I can't wait to read the next one! :D

I'd feel horrified if I was Hazel too, my god. Great new chapter, despite the awful aura it has, and keep it up!

awesome new chapter! Can't wait for a new one to be out, but take your time to make it rock

wow I can honestly say that I wasn't expecting to see another chapter of this story... ever. You can't imagine how happy I was when I saw that you updated! and such a great chapter! how are you so good at this? xD
Thank you for the update, hope there will be more soon... xD

I'm going to assume that you posted chapter 16 of Brooksworth Academy (again) by mistake...:D Although it feels good to re-read a good chappie...:D I knew it was familiar to me from the very first paragraph...:D

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEE

Soo, I just swallowed these fifteen wonderful chapters in less than 24 hours and let me tell you...I have never had more inspiration in my life! I am absolutely in love with your story, your style and the idea in general! However, I have noticed something that made my happy mood jump to sad...you've updated last four or so months ago...I do hope you didn't decide to stop...? Riiight? Pretty please tell me you didn't give up on it?! :D Anyway, I don't want to put pressure or anything like that, just wanted to let you know how amazing your story is and how incredibly impatiently I'm gonna be waiting for the next chapter...:D
PS. Since Christmas is nearing, I also want to wish you an early 'Merry Christmas' and the holiday in general! All the best! :D

I almost cried, and I still am almost crying. Trust me, this chapter was REALLY good, especially with the emotion. The only confusing part is the fact that she is getting over Tristan so fast. I, personally, would be devastated and entirely torn apart by his death if I was her. But, then again, I haven't been trained to be emotionless and a super-cool spy Loved it, love the story, and love you as a writer!

Yay update! I liked that Mr Creed didn't freak out or anything after Hazel kissed him... does this mean the two of them are, you know, sort of together now? Here's hoping! :)

wow! this was well worth the wait! I really like that Mr Creed action :-)

plz publish the next chapter. ik u had exams but i just cant wait that long!

Noooooo Tristan! TRISTANNNNN T_T

Yay sequel! I just finished Brooksworth Academy awhile ago and now im here. So exciting!