| Reviews for Brush Pass |
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Victoria A. Carastile 12/23/11 . chapter 10Poor Hazel... I really want her and Mr Creed to make up, cus they both have some serious issues to sort out with each other. Looking forward to that twist you promised! |
Blood-Drop 12/13/11 . chapter 8Since it wouldn't let me rereview the next chapter, I had to go back one. Anyway, your story is going great, I didn't see any mistakes, and where are those Christmas chapters you promised? I have to know what is going to happen to Hazel! |
socialbutrfly1379 12/8/11 . chapter 9I love this story. I read "Brooksworth Academy" and I thought it was awesome! Update soon, please! :) |
Ellie Dunbar 11/28/11 . chapter 9Ugh, I'm depressed now:( That's how good this story is. |
Blood-Drop 11/27/11 . chapter 9Love the progress! The sad thing is, I was listening to a really really sad song when Mr. Creed went all meanie on her. ((Meanie is to prevent a different word xD you'll never know when children may read this)) I'll have to remember to look in more! |
Victoria A. Carastile 11/26/11 . chapter 9Oh damn. I knew things were going too well in the previous chapters... and now they fought. I don't particularly like Mr Creed in this chapter. And what's the deal with him and Emily? I really don't like her. Poor Hazel. But she's a strong person! And Mr Creed will realise his foolishness eventually. |
Victoria A. Carastile 11/19/11 . chapter 8So, the pictures of Hazel are creepy... And I don't have anyone to suspect! Unless it's that Mark guy that Lottie likes... which would be random. And the last part was so AWKWARD! They almost kissed! Almost! That blasted Mr Sheppard! I hope Mr Creed doesn't get into trouble... Oh maybe in the next chapter, you can add a little more of Mr Sheppard's background story? |
Skyless16 11/18/11 . chapter 7I'm so glad you updated. I thought that you were just going to quit the story for a while and i sorta freaked. Lol. This chapter was awesome! Can't wait for more! |
Ellie Dunbar 11/12/11 . chapter 7Really good! I love this series:) Creed and Hazel are so perfect together. And I read all of your A/N's! As to which story idea sounds more interesting, to me I think the first one does. But that's probably because I don't tend to like tear jerkers very much, so I'm not too intrigued by the second idea. Tear jerkers depress me. |
Victoria A. Carastile 11/12/11 . chapter 7I read your author's notes! I'm so glad you're updating again :) though this chapter seemed more like a filler to me... but agents Hope and Ackerman are on the team! Nathaniel Ackerman just doesn't strike me as a nice guy, though. He annoys me... And I like idea 1! Though its a pity that its not teacher/student, cus I would love to see another Hazel/Creed type of relationship without all the spy madness... but good luck with your new stories :D |
Scribbled Truth 11/7/11 . chapter 6I'm in love with this story and its prequel. I like the fact that you haven't just got Cedric and Hazel together as many other fics do, you've kept them apart and kept the reader wanting more. I seriously can't wait for more ;D |
Evaine 11/7/11 . chapter 6Can't wait for the next chapter! For reals! I finished reading the first book in a day, and these six chapters in a couple of hours. Haha. So it's safe to say I'm totally addicted to this series! You're writing is amazing! You inspire me to be a better writer myself:) |
Skyless16 10/7/11 . chapter 6please keep writing! I love it so far! |
ceryslikesturtles 9/22/11 . chapter 6Oh wow, this is amazing! I really liked this chapter, so good! :) |
DamnColdNight 9/19/11 . chapter 6Thank God, she uploaded. I loved it, once again. It's full of their relationship and there's still action and everything, props to that :) When Mr. Creed wakes Hazel up and she goes all apeshit, I laughed so hard. Their relationship is pretty adorable. Update soon? love. |