|Reviews for Raining Fire|
| WereMagi 1/8/12 . chapter 5
You spelt plate wrong, "plat".
Apart from that, great chapter!
| WereMagi 1/4/12 . chapter 4
... Why is their lack of ass kicking when he could over come a lot of them?
| Equilibrium 9/10/11 . chapter 1
This was a fair opening chapter. The writing itself was fluent enough, with some really hilarious dialogue, although there were a few grammatical mistakes sprinkled here and there. As for plot, the concept of the arranged marriage and reluctant/rebellious bride-to-be is rather common on Fictionpress, but other things - the hint about Emmeline's unusual powers, for example - do provide some interesting hooks for readers. It will be interesting to see where this collab goes.
| WereMagi - Death's Messenger 7/27/11 . chapter 3
First part prior to kid napping was jarring. Second half was alright. Can't say much, itching to work on Chapter four of DW. Well, the draft before the First Draft/upload
| Reptar 7/25/11 . chapter 2
Oh no! Emmeline! I wonder what could've happened to her! And poor, dear Cole. He was only trying to help. I must admit, I very much enjoy this story :) It's a wonderful piece of work
| Reptar 7/25/11 . chapter 1
I must admit, I did believe Cole would end up with Emmeline until the author's note. However, I have a friendship similar to theirs with a man I've known for seven years. Although, I must praise you! This first chapter is absolutely enticing! I can't wait to read the next :)
| WereMagi 7/24/11 . chapter 2
... Again, jarring. Also, dragged, not drug.
| WereMagi - Death's Messenger 7/18/11 . chapter 2
Chapter needs a revamp. Nothing is explained very well and things slow down and speed up and slow down. Kinda jarring. Its a good chapter,nothing against it, but it can be better.
| WereMagi again 7/6/11 . chapter 1
Also, your summary sucks balls. Fire and Water? Overused material my friend. Jai-Kai only has fire abilities because someone had to lit Hell's flame and it would be cooler for him to do it.
| WereMagi - Death's Messenger 7/6/11 . chapter 1
Plot, themes and other things in this story that may help me name it. I pretty much know your style, which was quite good and posh like, so I wont say much on that.
I will, however, be a 'tad' critical on the next chapter. One annoyance of Collabs is that one person does well, the other screws it up. Hence why I no longer do collabs. No pressure Cole.