|Reviews for His Obsession|
| Binkybaby 6/4/12 . chapter 12
GO GO GOOOOOOOOO update fastly like lol I really liked this (:
| darknightstar 11/9/11 . chapter 12
I love your story, hope you update soon! :)
| beverlyamethyst16 10/7/11 . chapter 12
Great chapter :D
| Momo17 10/6/11 . chapter 12
Loved it! Update soon! How cute is chad?
| the.sky.angel 10/6/11 . chapter 12
hahahaha! lol... travis goin on and on bout their first date! ha! can the next chapter be bout some getting jelious or something... or when they go his house?
| beverlyamethyst16 9/28/11 . chapter 11
Nawwwwwww! So freaking cute :D
I promise to always review... so I guess that means you just have to update...
Right ? Hahahaha
| Natalie Field 8/17/11 . chapter 11
Definitely enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for stories like this. Keep it up!
| tish 8/16/11 . chapter 11
oh, the lines are so romantic...hope you get more inspired as you write further.
also, please don't conclude the story yet...can't get enough of it. more plot please, i still want more of Bangs' apathy and Chad's persistence :)
| Guest 8/15/11 . chapter 11
This is really good please update soon!
| Infinite Legend 8/8/11 . chapter 11
Love this story! And Rawr has been proved wrong xD. Too bad she can't admit she's in love with him...tis obvious. Ahh well. Please update soon!
| Traquor 8/6/11 . chapter 11
a date chapter. whoot!
all right, first off, I do have a bit of criticism for you today, but its really only grammar stuff. Make sure to put commas on sentences like: "Of course, Mrs. Lurch," he assured (,) calling her by her maiden name. Or "Aren't they gorgeous?" she awed (,) pulling a smile across her face...
just a simple comma will make it flow much better. : )
anyway, that's all I could pick out on this chapter. Otherwise it was very cute and fun! I love how reluctant she is about doing even the smallest things, like eating cotton candy. And Chad is growing on me more and more. : ) good job. : D
| ron 8/5/11 . chapter 11
love is in the air..
| Momo17 8/3/11 . chapter 11
*new reader* ohhh I loved it! I'm totally team chad! I think she coulda been a little nicer, oh well ...update soon!
| chilier2 8/2/11 . chapter 11
Awesome as always! Can't wait to see what happens ...Rilaaaaaa fall in love with Chaddddddd!
| Flicka3.o 8/2/11 . chapter 11
Really great story!