I liked it! I think it'd be a different way of learning, but I dunno, the way I read it in my head made it sound catchy. xDD Awesome job!

Highly informative. If I had more time, I'd read it more calmly

it's too bad the formatting didn't take. I think this would work, it's a differnet way of learning you know? There was probably spaces in between the officers, without them it makes it hard to read. but not bad overall.