|Reviews for Never: The Creature of the night series|
| Insanity Streak 9/27/11 . chapter 5
Argh! I was expecting to read a chapter and it was a A/N *weeps* hopefully you get your mojo back soon. :D
| Lady of romance world88 7/27/11 . chapter 2
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG! Why are men ran after Korie since her parents's death? What's going on here? Why does men want Korie so badly? Does Korie have to do something to them? Oh no... Korie is going die. Please don't let Korie die. :( OMG! I am wonder who's call Korie? I am so glad to see that Korie is saved by the mystery man. Thats so sweet of him. :) I am wonder who's he? I am wonder where he's take Korie to? Ah... He took her to his house. Thats so sweet of him. :) I am wonder how does Padric knew Korie? I am wonder what kind of game does Padric talk about? What kind of powers/ability does Korie have? Let me guess, Korie don't remember what happen to her parents and why. Thats meant Korie and Padric met each other before. I am wonder why Padric protect Korie from? This story is so interesting. :) Its amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I will read the rest of this story tomorrow. :) And I am off to read Emilee's story now plus Elynn's one shot story so you have three reviews from me. :)
| mihaela 7/24/11 . chapter 4
please updaet soon
| Insanity Streak 7/22/11 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed this chapter, though I wish it was a little longer. The best bits are when Padric is happy and sarcastic - I truly think you have made a drool-worthy character ;) The background info on Padric was really well developed for having been written so brief. So, I think that's pretty good.
I also have some things to say... lol. Firstly, Korie didn't really seem very kick ass in this chapter and I was wondering why. In the first chapter, she came across as a very strong female character and I was left slightly confused as to whether she can defend herself or not.
Secondly, with Padric's mind reading gift, can he read all minds or is it just particular minds?
Lastly, how could you end the chapter like this? I'm going to die waiting for your next update, haha.
I think after The Bet, this is fast becoming one of my favourite stories. :) its addictive.
Also, when you do get around to your next update of this story, could you please provide a description of both Korie and Padric. Perhaps I have missed it, but for now, I'm imagining Padric as the Irish witch from an episode of supernatural and Korie is alternating between a blonde and brunette woman.
All in all, absolutely fabulous. The moments between Korie and PAdric make me go "fgfhtdsg" and head desking in awe :) You're doing a great job. :)
| Lady of romance world88 7/21/11 . chapter 1
Hi. It's very beautiful prologue and I love it. :) I am wonder if he is the Padroc? And she is the Koira? I am wonder if Koira is irish? I am wonder why Koira is on the run from organization who want her death? What secrets does he have to do that she hate him for it? I am wonder who's he and why he's the one who she wish that she shouldn't met him at all? I am wonder why? And what he have to do with her? OMG! This prologue is so interesting and make me read more of this story. :) I am wonder what if he gain her trust and her love that lead her death? Then why? Sorry if I keep ask too questions because I can't help it and I always curious about it. :) It's amazing prologue and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I will read this story later today. :) And I am glad that you write a dark prologue because it always work and grab the readers's attention to read this story. :) I am so excited to read the series of this book. :D
| mihaela 7/14/11 . chapter 3
please update again soon
| Insanity Streak 7/11/11 . chapter 3
When I was reading this, all I could think of was Padric and his Irish accent :D Also, the dream scene was quite chilling. I think you wrote that really well. Also, I don't think this is going too fast, rather, it seems like you have begun the story halfway in the middle and not from the beginning. So, it kind of feels as if I have missed out on some pretty important details. Anyway, good chapter. I can't wait to find out Padric's part in all of this. Hmm. Anyway, interesting chapter - I hope to see some more sarcasm and the like between Padric and Korie. All in all, I enjoyed this. :D
| mihaela 7/9/11 . chapter 2
please update soon
| Insanity Streak 7/9/11 . chapter 2
I have a feeling this is going to be addictive. Korie's character is intersting and she seems pretty kick ass; Padric's character made me think a little more. He was described as being in his twenties, yet he sounds so much older yet, more like a paternal figure, however, there is still more character development in this area to be had. I think this needed to be a little more intense, but that is just me I guess. All in all, not bad for a first chapter. Sorry for the late review too. I hope you update soon. :D
| Insanity Streak 7/8/11 . chapter 1
Oh! I love a good fantasy story. I really want to see where this will go because there is so much you can do with it, from reading the description. I hope you update on it very soon. Also, some constructive criticism, reduce the amount of "..." you use. I think you might have used too many of them. Yeah, it did help with the tone you were trying to create however it was a little distracting for me. Anyhow, I can't wait!