|Reviews for Lost In Her Own Little World|
| DemonicFantasies666 9/5/11 . chapter 1
Your little story is so amazing! I love how describe everything and I just love this short story! It's really good and your a great writer!
| Einsamkeit 8/5/11 . chapter 1
This is truly amazing. You've conveyed your feelings in a beautiful manner, in a way that other writers can relate. I love it so much.
| DewleafWolf 8/1/11 . chapter 1
Very nice! I like this. To be honest, this is how I am. I was literally just writing a couple paragraphs about how I get lost in a world of daydreams and fantasies, then literally wake up and realize I'm just typing. This is a great story and I really like it, it is relatable to any writer. (Such as myself.)
I don't see much I can critique. I see you have 74 stories, so that's probably why I don't see any errors! Good job.
| OrangeZest100 7/20/11 . chapter 1
This is absolutely amazing. It's beautiful, poetic, and full of the words that make up my life. Luckily for me, my real world friends live parts of their lives in the words too, so I won't be alone.
| AnonomousNotReally 7/17/11 . chapter 1
great job! i really got the feel of what you were saying. hey, i would bve etstatic of you read and reveiwed my story, Home for the Normal Impaired. I dont want to seem like i'm fishing for reviews of anything. Great job!
| ArcticEnderFox 7/12/11 . chapter 1
Erin, do you ever feel like your characters take over you? That's what I feel like sometimes.
But about shutting your friends out - will that really happen if you get too caught up in your own world?
Thanks for sharing your inner thoughts.
Those who have been there understand.
| Let.The.Stars.Shine 7/10/11 . chapter 1
This is really good! Update as soon as you can!
| Lady Scarlet of Stormhold 7/10/11 . chapter 1
This... I don't get it. Well, I do get it, but I don't... I like the attic idea, that creates a nice picture. But... I don't know! It's just a bit confusing, the penultimate paragraph, with the stuff about the door (which door are we talking about here - a physical door, or a door in her mind to where the stories are kept?) and the lock of words, and the stuff about "Words that know when to leave. Words that know they can open the door to the right people, and shut out the rest. Knowing I need to find a real world." ?
But it's good, I like it. I like all the imagery, like "it melts away in the morning, the twisted glass spires and crystal stairs shattering to nothingness" - that is officially an awesome line. XD Me likes!