|Reviews for I'm not even here|
| CoverGirlInLove 7/9/11 . chapter 1
But I still liked it.
| punctured.lungs 7/9/11 . chapter 1
| sesame.seed.bagels 7/9/11 . chapter 1
Wow! This is a great poem! Honestly, I don't read many poems that don't use proper grammar in their summaries (a tell-tale sign of an unworthy poem) but I am glad I picked today to be merciful. This is very, very good. You have said a lot in very little words, which should be the goal of any poet. It's a very conversational outburst, sounding very human, as the poem is saying. Bravo.