Nice ending. :) Not a lot of endings do a story justice but I enjoyed it. I love the Smilers too. Creepy bastards. All in all o loved the story! Good work!

AH

Aww they're such good doggies! Into the depths of Hell we go. La Di da di da. :) Uhm I wonder what's up with that odd Smiler though. But I don't want to the story to end yet! Arg, such an impasse. -facefault- Off I go again then.

AH

Last paragraph it should be your not you're. And again.

Dun dun DUNNN!

This was so short it all fit onto my phone screen. Just thought you might find that interesting. Lol Anywho dun dun dunnnnnn and so starts the suspense. :D

I fond myself growing oddly fond of Bugs. And haha, dumb bitch. I can't believe she didn't see that coming. So much for an intelligent new world order. -sigh- oh well. I guess some people just weren't meant to survive. -wolfish grin-

Off to the neeeext -skips away with a sing-songy voice-over

AH

Hmm, can't tell if this is ominous foreshadowing or if Ash is just being a doofus. Lol. This was pretty short compared to the others, I think. Still, it gets its point across. :)

This was a little hard to follow in a few places and there were a few words missing but other than that the suspense was boss. I never thought I'd read them talking like that. Lol. Now then. Nighty might and sleep well!

AH

Man picturing that little girl just gives me the creeps. I don't know what it is about in horror flicks but they're freaky. Lol. Maybe I'm just a wimp. Haha. Sorry my reviews have been lacking, I'm annoyed and aggravated and 3 shades of depressed so I'm reading to ignore it all and it's helping. So thanks. :) hahaha not that you wrote this knowing it would negate my me-ness but thanks anyways.

Go them, busting through an electric fence like a couple a badasses. Haha

I'm liking this story more and more. Idk I guess I'm just in a mood for horroe lately. :) Next chappy for meeeee

AH

Messiah of the Fruit Loops XDDDDDDDD Ahhh that made my DAY! And that's saying something with how damn edgy I am right now. Blaaaaag

Couple of misspellings here and there, but still good. Didn't see that twist coming for a mile. Could just be tired lol. I like the direction. Off to the next one ;)

AH

I liiike it. The Smilers are utterly eerie. Picturing them give me the heebs. I also like that this is a touch longer than some of the other things I've read, as far as a solid chapter goes. The ending seems a bit hasty, and there were runons, but other than that it was great quality as usual. :) Can't wait to read more.

AH

Aww, couldn't they have tried to find where the White Robes kept the vaccine? ...I suppose that ending would have been too perfect, though.

This turned out to be a pretty engaging story. At first, it seemed a little cliche, but right away it deviated from my expectations. There were a few typos and, once again, run-along sentences in here, but it was mostly well-written. Overall, it was a good, enjoyable story. The summary you posted it with doesn't do it justice.

These seems like a good start. The Smilers *do* sound creepy based on your description.