Jonah's a bit of a jerk, and Hayden is quite interesting. I think I'm going to have fun with watching these two...

Ba ha ha. It usually annoys me when characters faint in stories-about half the time or more it's completely unrealistic-but this cracked me up to no end so I'm good with it.

Nice voice to the narrator so far, gonna enjoy reading the next chapter.

Oooooooh

You need to update! A.S.A.P! :) I love this alot!

I can't believe Jonah punched Hayden. D: What a mess. I can't imagine what their relationship will be like after this. Will they avoid each other like the plague or will they seek each other out to apologize? I'm so curious.

Thank you for the update. I really like this story. :)

I'm obsessing over this story! Its so good! Update soon! I recommend you post this on Wattpad and I'll help you get the views you deserve! This is...awesome.

Poor Zee, hopefully things will start to get better for him soon!

Good scene between Jonah & AMie, and it was about time he opened his mouth and was honest with her for a change.

BTW I luvd the pizza/movie scene between Hayden and Jonah last chap, but man that brother Greg has got to go, what a jerk.

Looking forward to reading more!

Jonah can do a hell of a lot better than that c*nt. Good riddance. Jonah will feel the sweet taste of freedom after a good cry.

And how horrifying for Zee. Kitch should be dragged out and shot. What a monster. Was he even getting treatment for it? Because the meds should have made it harder for the disease to transfer over to someone else.

Actually, this brings up the problem with Hayden. He's a recovering drug addict that has had unprotected sex with strangers after his concerts. He is bound to have some kind of STI. It would be a miracle if he didn't. Jonah better demand that Hayden be tested before they do anything (which will be far off in the future since neither are acknowledging that they may be gay).

This is a really good story so far, with interesting characters. I like the way Jonah & Hayden's relationship is slowly developing. I can't wait til Jonah meets Hayden's kids, it should be fun!

Keep up the good work!

M-MY HEART. I THINK IT'S MELTING

Seriously, you're great, and I love these characters. WRITE MORE uwu

more! write more why did you stop?

This is a cute story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Awwww, that was sweeet - didn't think Jonah had it in him :D. These characters are awesome, and I'm kinda desperate to read more (no pressure :P). Glad you persevered through the hassle in order to upload this!

Wow, I was so glad to see this updated! I'm not particularly skilled at writing reviews, but I'm attempting it, as I think this story deserves a lot more. I think you're doing a really good job of developing your characters and making them likeable/sympathetic... Thanks for posting, and I hope to read more soon! :)

Good story so far! The characters are really interesting, and the scenario too... Looking forward to reading more!

NEXT CHAPTER. Totally loving it as you can see :)