thanks for the update very short though but please update again soon

This is a great story, I'm really glad I came across it! It's a slower paced story but it's consistent and the characters really shine! Can't wait for the next update!

YOU WATCH BLEACH?

Do you like Ichiruki? Or do you like ichihime?

OR THE BEST OPTION ULQUIHIME! xD :3

Awwww...poor Alissa.

I feel kinda bad.

I wish we could know something about what's going on with Ben and Alissa though. Especailly their past, but it's the mystery that makes it interestting as well. So I'll wait :]

Too short of a chapter!

Yesssss! New chapter!

hmm, I already don't like Red. I know she's supposed to be like that, but I smell trouble!

Actually, I thought this chapter was rather short!

I love how as your story moves on, the plot becomes more twisted and intricate. Some stories lose their zest over time, but yours seem to increase.

i LOVE this story! its sooooo great! you write really, really, well! please update soon! :D

Hmm, a very quick update. Thanks for clearing up my confusion :) Since Alissa is becoming less and less like a ghost, does this mean she'll turn into something else or disappear altogether? Just speculating..

Just one error that I saw:

"The shapeshifter got the pointer after a moment, and he winced."

I think you meant "point", not "pointer".

Wait, back up. How can Ryland touch he arm I thought it was hoodoo voodoo, writer's ceative license that allowed Ben to be able to kiss he, but Ryland? Explain please :)

I understand where you came from Ben.

But..

Wrong move, very WRONG move :)

Awww poor alissa :( I hope that she gets her happy ending and that ryland will smarten up a bit.. looking forward to the mexy chapter!

love it plz ud soon XD

Goodness this is getting better chapter by chapter. The emotional element is certainly very strong in this chapter and I must admit that I feel very bad for A.