|Reviews for Temperamental|
| xxRivaxx 11/4/11 . chapter 39
thanks for the update very short though but please update again soon
| languor 10/27/11 . chapter 38
This is a great story, I'm really glad I came across it! It's a slower paced story but it's consistent and the characters really shine! Can't wait for the next update!
| The.Violent.Spazz 10/24/11 . chapter 38
YOU WATCH BLEACH?
Do you like Ichiruki? Or do you like ichihime?
OR THE BEST OPTION ULQUIHIME! xD :3
I feel kinda bad.
I wish we could know something about what's going on with Ben and Alissa though. Especailly their past, but it's the mystery that makes it interestting as well. So I'll wait :]
| Neuravinci 9/3/11 . chapter 33
Too short of a chapter!
| Neuravinci 8/15/11 . chapter 30
Yesssss! New chapter!
| Choukou 8/11/11 . chapter 29
hmm, I already don't like Red. I know she's supposed to be like that, but I smell trouble!
| Neuravinci 8/4/11 . chapter 29
Actually, I thought this chapter was rather short!
| Neuravinci 8/1/11 . chapter 27
I love how as your story moves on, the plot becomes more twisted and intricate. Some stories lose their zest over time, but yours seem to increase.
| kompletely-kaley 8/1/11 . chapter 27
i LOVE this story! its sooooo great! you write really, really, well! please update soon! :D
| Choukou 7/28/11 . chapter 24
Hmm, a very quick update. Thanks for clearing up my confusion :) Since Alissa is becoming less and less like a ghost, does this mean she'll turn into something else or disappear altogether? Just speculating..
Just one error that I saw:
"The shapeshifter got the pointer after a moment, and he winced."
I think you meant "point", not "pointer".
| Choukou 7/27/11 . chapter 23
Wait, back up. How can Ryland touch he arm I thought it was hoodoo voodoo, writer's ceative license that allowed Ben to be able to kiss he, but Ryland? Explain please :)
| The.Violent.Spazz 7/25/11 . chapter 21
I understand where you came from Ben.
Wrong move, very WRONG move :)
| Alicia Henmer 7/23/11 . chapter 19
Awww poor alissa :( I hope that she gets her happy ending and that ryland will smarten up a bit.. looking forward to the mexy chapter!
| Vampireacademyrox 7/23/11 . chapter 19
love it plz ud soon XD
| Neuravinci 7/23/11 . chapter 19
Goodness this is getting better chapter by chapter. The emotional element is certainly very strong in this chapter and I must admit that I feel very bad for A.