|Reviews for Hunted|
| Laoch 8/5/11 . chapter 1
:) I must say, you started this off with a bang. Excellent discriptions that worked really well, because they made the story come off more realistic and likeable. I did notice a few little gramatical errors that disrupted the flow a bit (choppy sentances and such) but not much other then that. Great word choice and so far, pretty good.
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| Gentle 7/18/11 . chapter 2
That was certanly an eventful chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Gentle 7/14/11 . chapter 1
That was... intresting. I'm curious to know why the narrator is running, the description is better and flows more than most first person stories I've read.
| Historicalbookworm 7/14/11 . chapter 1
I don't really like first person stories. But, good anyways ;)