| Reviews for Ode to Paradise |
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Trinaluv33 7/15/11 . chapter 1Loved this! |
the.food.of.love 7/15/11 . chapter 1aw, what cute rhymes :) lovely poem, too. you also might try writing a couple poems without rhyme sometime. rhymes are wonderful things, but poetry can be comprised of so much more-alliteration, rhythm, imagery, etc. the more techniques you explore, the more your poetry can grow :) |