|Reviews for Ode to Paradise|
| Trinaluv33 7/15/11 . chapter 1
| the.food.of.love 7/15/11 . chapter 1
aw, what cute rhymes :) lovely poem, too.
you also might try writing a couple poems without rhyme sometime. rhymes are wonderful things, but poetry can be comprised of so much more-alliteration, rhythm, imagery, etc. the more techniques you explore, the more your poetry can grow :)