|Reviews for The World in Play: Chapter 2: The Orca in the Lake|
| Loraine Wentworth 7/18/12 . chapter 1
I'm starting to get to know more about Ann and so far I like her. I'd like to know more about her magical abilities- does she have specific limits? I'll keep reading to find out more though! I really like the bird dialogue. It's probably how they would talk, if they could.
Some confusion about the geography: You mention the setting is a reservoir. How did the orca get into the reservoir?
she felt a steady flow of water, east to west, all around her. She
assumed it was a small branch [Formatting problem here]